With the presentation of all three parts coming up I wanted to revisit my part two documentation to make it visually more appealing but also communicate more concisely what it was I wanted to share.
Based off feedback from peers and tutors after the last presentation I removed a lot of the text and edited down what was left. I also included several images that helped explain the intervention more adequately as well as adjusting the sizing and layout of already exisiting images. I also put the images into photoshop and edited the white balance as they had all been quite dark and yellow in the first iteration.
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